Zuz Work Sample Feedback

2020-06-29 Zuz Work Sample Feedback For submission to WRT

MICROBIAL GUANGZHOU I don’t know what’s typical in your field, but I think it might be stronger to represent this project as utilizing the methodologies specified in the project brief (e.g. speculative design) without framing it as “this was the assignment; here’s what I did.” The reasoning behind this suggestion is that this project can stand on its own without needing to be defined as a class project. The tradeoff is loss of precision as to what the course required.

SUPERSTRUCTURE “the idea of layers of personal habitats that could protect its wearer” Agreement: Maybe “could protect their wearer”?

“that would be used in a more offensive defense action” This is confusing wording.

IN DEFENSE

“writing the script” might want to specify Grasshopper script, since we were just thinking about a film.

“Editable text here” on p.14 & 15

ENTANGLED EMPATHY several incomplete sentences (I’m sure you know!)