Feedback Kevin & Shaan

Feedback: Kevin & Shaan

What do you mean by (workplace) empathy? Context of use is unclear.

Why is this better than just entering the workplace?

mechanic: NPCs

Citations needed for existing models.

You frame these as extrinsic “skills” instrumentally serving the needs of others. I’m skeptical about that. (impersonal empathy?) Identity, world, and others in the world are underdefined. Empathy needs to connect with yourself and with others.

Link between empathy and collaboration should come earlier.

typos in Fig. 3

Who will feel welcome in the fantasy world?

Perhaps theory of mind is a useful construct for linking empathy and collaboration?

Players often “figure out” NPCs and interact with them instrumentally. How will this game get players to regard NPCs as having intrinsic dignity?