RAC Feedback on ICLS paper

RAC Feedback on ICLS paper Introduction: 

Need, problem, solution framework.      Emphasize the long-term nature of the study, and why it matters. 

Dismantling inequitable barriers language—is that what the problem is?      Expand or remove

    Address 

Dig into the example—show how elaboration and computational content show up in the example. 

Don’t you want to make this about what’s compelling? Make it about the longitudinal. 

If I want to make the point about assessing CT, talk about that in the background. 

I can situate my measure as a new attempt. What is the reliability on this? Validity 

RELIABILITY AND VALIDITY

Operationalizing the alignment into an assessment.      I can talk about what people have done, and how I can analyze long-term effects. 

    Crohn-box alpha 

Table 2. That table takes  a lot of work to parse

Add in correlations between single-feature correlations. 

Units, SCUTUS  Kurtosis // Kill figure 3.