Rich SIFG Feedback

Rich SIFG Feedback What’s missing in a punchy way is why this will matter. —> Why is it important.      Beyond capturing and describing this, explain how I’m going to use this to start to fix the problem that I’ve identified. 

        People will listen?

        Or what can I do next with this? 

1. Critical computation. Antiracist education. MAKE IT PUNCHY. 

2. Reframe discussion in terms of mechanisms. Now it will be productive. Let people see what is invisible. 

In the first two paras, little fixes that are important to make. 

Leaky pipeline